Okay I both loved but-and I have to be honest-and don't love the story. I love it because it's orginal. Because it was funny, because it was pure Draco through and through. Howeever there was one problem that got in the way. Words were smashed together, and it was hard to keep up with it. Was this intenational or no? I really did love the story, but the way it was structured made it so hard to read

You have such flair and style when you write that it's a constant amazement to me.

I'm disappointed when the story actually ends if only because I no longer have it to read. You're fabulously talented. All your witty dialogue is spot on character-wise, all the thoughts Harry and Draco have, all the brief history lessons of Malfoy ancestors, are gems. I loved every minute of this and I can't wait to read another one of your stories.

Wonderful, delightful, and So Much, Fun! Thank you so much for sharing this.

-Judith-

absolutely bloody bril!

perfect story and i love how you split the paragraphs and words up for emphasis. very creative and art-like :)

My dear sweet lord. That was the best one-shot I have ever read in my life- certainly the most literate. I have heard all of the words you used, of course, but... the way you used them was simply poetic... It was witty, deep, passionate... and yet it had an undertone of frivality to it. In a word or three, all I can say is that I loved it.

Hot and funny and lovely. Nicely done.

wow! that was very descriptive and poetric!

I love it. This was hilarious! Lots and lots of fun to read. I very much admire your way with words, and your somewhat warped, but nevertheless extremely effective humour. You have far too few reviews. I only hope that you realise that despite that the disappointing lack of response is not at all a reflection on your work; it was very much enjoyed and appreciated.

Excellent characterisation, dialogue, construction of plot. Everything, in fact, was top notch.

I am delighted to say that I am adding this to my favourite stories, and you to my favourite authors; a well deserved position.

Congratulations, and with thanks,

aliba

omfg... wonderfull... I am right now (after writing this) hopping to a friend of mine and I'm gonna make her read this! Wonderfull... it's so fucking hot and well... hm... ok, I'm just gonna shut the fuck up! I'm babbling again! Joey

that was awesome... i'm speachless!

oh... you write so well. Please don't ever stop, okay? Otherwise i shall be quite miffed. Draco is hateful, Harry is so, so dense, and together they're incredible.

Wow. I don't know what I admire most in your fic - the eloquence, the way you're playing with words and meanings, the well-placed word repetitions and the alliterations - or the mere hotness factor.

Brilliantly done.

I love the way you make the reader feel the speed rising through the reading, the rise of energy and, well, yes, did I mention the hotness?

'The Fine Line' is really a gemstone seldomly found on ffnet (unfortunately).

Just one question, though. What do you think do you need a *beta* for?

The only thing I'm missing is a properly edited form, which generally makes the reading so much easier...

That was witty. And romantic, in an odd sort of way. Hard to follow sometimes too, but that only proves your talents as a writer. Please do allow me to worship you.

Wow, you are an extremely witty person! This is one of the best H/D pieces I've ever read. Great character development, wonderful dialouge, amusing comparisons. My one constructive comment is that your symbolism is bash us over the head obvious. Then again, so was Hawthorne's, and he's one of American literature's greatest authors. I'd do him. But that's off topic.
I sincerely hope that you devote your life to writing someday, because I'm sure that you could make some great contributions.

Bloody hell! and that's about all i can say!
Btw, if you accepted reviews from anonymous people you would most likely get more. They normally leave their pen-name anyway.

One word: "Wow!" Never have I read a FF with so much enthusiasm. I didn't read this story, I 'felt' it. This is definately the best fiction I've EVER read and I think it's paramount that you continue to enlighten my plebian existence furthermore.
With much love and encouraging anticipation,
Kero x.X.x