oh I like very much well done.

Omg hot hot hot hot hot. I apologize for my incoherency, but that's the first thought that came to mind as I was reading this. Dang! Your writing is so beautiful, and I love Sands's and El's interaction. I also like the symbolism of the storm and the water. Magnificent job, really. You rock! :-)

wow, great stuff! A stormy scene suits these two well. You capture scenes so perfectly. *applaudes and throws roses*

nice. lol.

Oh, that's nice. But it figures that any "fluffy" story for this fandom would take place during a dtorm of the century.

Just the thing to read on a cold early morning.
/Here, enclosed by rain and wind and sky, they were free./

hehe.. huzzah for random desires to write mini-slash ficlets! spiffy fun.
~ep41

Absolutely bloody fantastic! Ok, not a very original review, but what else can I say? Gotta love the El/Sands pairing :)

OH MY GOODNESS! This was without a doubt one of your steamiest scenes YET! It was short but really and truly got the point across! GEZE!
I've read it.. lemme think *counts on fingers*... 8 times! Terrific seeing your muse back and in such fine form.
Take care of you and *lifts glas of champagne* here's to a prosperous NEW YEAR in which Miss Becky's books grace the shelves of all her ff.net fans ;)

I love love love you! I just came back from vacation and the first thing I did was jump on this contraption and read some fanfic. Yay for PWP! And this was even NON-smut PWP. That, my friend, is wonderous in itself. Carry on!

"Someone might like to read"? Dear, you don't know the strength of your own writing :) Great snapshot, am still smiling.

Becky! Shame, shame! "with or on?" dirty, dirty mind...oh, why do I bother, you know I love you anyway.

rar! i loved you lil' fic! i love all your OUATIM fics, i hope you keep at them!

M...I like your muse. Nay, I love your muse. I only hope it speaks up more often! ;-) SJ and El in the rain... yummy. That does indeed paint a lovely, lovely picture...
-Merrie

Hey! It´s good to see you´re back! I liked your story and would love to read more El/Sands slash from your! ;-)
By the way, would you mind sending me the alternative chapter nine of "After the dust has cleared"? Would love to read it as well!