This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Keep it up Silvormoon!

can't say anything else other than it was absolutely precious

Hooray for good Ken! I love stories that play up Ken and Wormmon's newly founded friendship! I like the part where he played soccer with the little kids. Well, keep up the good work!

_sunnyplace123_

Kawaii story! Very Cute! Running out of Ways to say Cute.

Also, I LOL'd at Davis' Line.

No you won't.

( Bite me. )

- sigh -. Girgash opened this review early. We're finding typos as I read, and he wants to put them all here.

( She said she wanted criticism. )

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"The reality was a breathtaking."

( It should be: 'was breatktaking', or 'a breathtaking one'.)

"...desks doing busywork."

( What, in Heaven's name, is 'busywork'?. It should be: 'desks, busy doing work'.)

" *Free!* he exulted "

( FFn review bot may delete the asterisks in the quote, but it doesn't make a difference. 'exulted' should be 'exclaimed', or something like that. Also, it would have been a good idea to make the first 'Free!' a spoken sentence, and the second 'Free!' a thought: Ken's reinforcing his declaration. )

"... some portable food items... "

( Wow. Where have you ever seen 'unportable' food? )

At my house. Usually, at around dinner.

( It's called Tupperware, Dragonclaw. And it's from your memory, so you should know. )

( Okay: Once again, a very good story. Full marks on the 'Maturity Scale'. Even a non-Digimon fan would appreciate this fic. )

I'm guessing this particular author reads alot.

( I think you may be right. )

Heh: Ken's day out reminded me of the times I used to sneak away from school.

( What was your record? Three days a week for a month? )

Bad stomach.

This is by far the most CUTEST Ken/Wormmon fic Ive ever read. You know somthing like this sould have been put in the series, I mean it; just a nice episode of Ken and Wormmon spending time together - dont stop writing!

Aww! this was so cute, and fluffy, and perfect! Just the thing I was needing to read. thanks!

Extremely cute and beautifully written. Keep up the good work :)

~Vestque of Enchantments~

Would this come after The Vigil, or be in continuity with the show? Never mind; I think it would work either way. Anyway, I'm happy for Ken, and a bit surprised that young Darrel managed to beat him in the soccer game. Eh, the former Emperor could use a bit of humbling. Great job!

WHAT TALENT WORK!

It did warm my heart though I am a Kaiser fan..

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May I translate it into Chinese?(my mother tongue)

aww that was so cute i really loved it tons

O It's very beautiful 33!

I read your history, althought I need the dictionary for tnaslate some words 33

I repeat that I like this history . You must continue in that way O

PD: I'm from Spain ._. Sorry!

Really cute story! I loved it!

AWESOME!

What a sweet story!