Ahh! I'm dying inside by this chapter. It's so sad, please tell me everything is going to be okay? Boys from the Dwarf, it's a family! To smeg with any other!

Terrific story! Thanks very much for the entertainment.

Holy crap, this was great. I mean, the formatting got a little messed up, and it would probably have worked better as a complete piece than in chapters... but oh, how I love this. I really liked the ending; how nothing was too obvious and everything was, as you say, kept between friends. Lovely. :)

You only got 6 reviews for this? That is cruddy. I loved it. :D

Okay so not the most influental review, but heck lol.

(Dont wanna sign in) that was absolutely amazing! definitely adding this to me faves! some bits made me cry - and i hardly ever cry! i loved it! just loved it! x.x fantastic!

The last few chapters are brilliant, you put the pain of Lister into me...

by bringing inspiration from the Dwarf and Lord Of The Rings; you've come up a winner here. Love the characterisation... love the pick-up from Rimmer's leaving.
Love the story. Well done. Keep writing xx

This is gonna sound desperate but YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS AND LET ME KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT COS THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. *Takes deep breath* Sorry. It's been ages since I've RD ficced and I remember how much I loved it. Keep up the god work.

So far so good. But you really need to doublespace your paragraphs, it makes it really hard to read.

More, More, More please! I like where this is going. Thank you.