 Pom Rania 10/5/10 . chapter 14Wow. That nightmare is... it just perfectly FITS. I love how it works in the story.
...is this the first time I've reviewed a chapter of your story? If so, I'm an idiot. |
 Death-Muncher 7/14/10 . chapter 21Cool story. :) Good job. |
 DEADDEADP2EU23HRY 8/25/08 . chapter 21This was just perfect... Before reading this story, I watched OUaTiM for the first time (I saw El Mariachi and Desperado eariler) and was suddenly aching for fanfiction of it. Needless to say, I've spent the last two hours completely absorbed in this story. I love love LOVED the ending...
Overall, it was amazing! It's obvious that you put a lot of thought and time into this, and it's totally paid off! Best of luck to yah! |
 Asher Elric 5/24/08 . chapter 21This was an enjoyable story. I liked it verymuch. |
 Asher Elric 5/24/08 . chapter 20Ah...okay...interesting end. I liked this. |
 Asher Elric 5/24/08 . chapter 19Aha! finally they kissed. |
 Asher Elric 5/24/08 . chapter 18Okey-doke, that was a good chapter.
Oh, and that one chaopter with the bath scene, I totally forgot, but I think it was "From Hell". |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 15This was a good chapter. I love the comentary on the movie. It's amusing. and yeah, I agree with you for El missing Sands being the preist and stuff. I love how that was Johnny's idea, that way they didn't need someone else and he could come up with another disguise. |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 14Nice ending. I think I know what your gonna do. |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 13This was a nice chapter.
I don't like El very much here. |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 12Nice chapter. Cool. |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 11Hahahahaha, that's funny.
I loved how Sands got one up on El. |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 10This was good. I couldn't concentrate through the last part because My sister had to be stupid and shreik in my ear. Brat.
Anyway, this was goo. |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 9Nicely done. |
 Asher Elric 5/23/08 . chapter 8Nice fight. I liked how you wrote the actionb scene. It's very nice. |