I LOVE this story! You are such a good writer! Please, don't EVER delete this story! I love it SO MUCH! D

Wow! Alot of things going on at once there- it's kinda hard to keep up with it all. But I like this story so far. Ok! On to the next chapter.

PS~ I think that the line that you used from Hikari is the wrong one.

i love this! the ending is good! oh, so Sephiroth is a good guy, it's always amusing to see Sephiroth meet Riku, they're so alike. you got some good, realistic, certain points in the story. i like your style, i hope you start the next RikuSora fic "

i'm intrigued. i read this story to compensate the cliffhanger in "Divine Sin" (with only 2 chapters! grr) now i know i can stick with this one. so far, i love this so much, not many write about the part between KH1 and 2, but you did a very good one. and as usual, i like your writing style, escpecially how intimate Riku is to Sora.

is there something behind the world that they lived in? when Sora brought up the question as to why there's human stuffs when it's heartless world, it kinda scares me. oh well,

now i'll go for the rest of the story.

This is so very good!

I first read this about a month ago. At the time, I didn't really pay much attention to it, but then several weeks later, I felt the need to read it again. Of course, I couldn't find it. So I searched high and low, putting in some of the most general words I could in the search engine in hopes of finding it. I scrolled through about twenty different favorites lists.

And then I found it. And it was good. Better than I remembered.

And all was good with the world.

This story...was BEAUTIFUL!

You have simply BLOWN ME AWAY!

Good job on this! Splendid! Just SPLENDID!

I love the story concerning Riku and Sora, but PLEASE! SEPHIROTH AND CLOUD ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE TOGETHER! LEON AND CLOUD! they are the most wonderful couple ever.. can YOU PLEASE WRITE A FIC ABOUT THEM TWO? I LOVE them! And so should you miss-all-smutty-writer:P No, I mean it, you are extremely godd, as in PERFECT!

This story was beautiful... _

This story was beautiful and written EXTREMLY well! ( I hope I spelled that right..) I love enerything about this fanfiction! It had my two most favorite pairings in the world! RikuXSora and SephirothXCloud!I hope you can make a sequel! I would defiantly read it, and I'm sure others would be happy too, if you made one! Anyway, keep up the fantastic work! YOUR WRITING SKILLS PAWN ALL!

Oh, I love this fic. I've had a great time reading it. Wonderful job. :)

Wow. This fic is so awesome. I mean, I already played KH2 (but didn't finish, damn disc got scratched... T_T), but I like this better. D

This is very good considering that you didn't have KHCOM or KH2 to work with. It's very pretty, PRETTY!

I like how you had a heartless produced from the destruction, for lack of a better word, of the Ansem/Riku hybrid...thing. Very creative. Hell, I liked all your concepts here, from the Koritsu world drawing power from Rikus heart, the paradox within Mizu, going to Hallow Bastion, EVERYTHING!

Of course, I love the pairings too. Mwee!

I applauds you and fav the story!

hello its me again

-yoai fan girl yell-

xD i loved it loved it loved it loved it xD

m..

as for mizu!

its xernort or whatever that guys real name is...

IT HAS TO BE! -eyes burning with fire-

AHH!

yeah um okay.

good bye

ah. im at chapter 3 xD

im just sad that im going to have to read the rest tomorrow.

i cant wait to read the rest xD

uh. ill review again after i finish the story... just cuz i like it that much xD

I just put this story on my alert list. Jumping Kittens on the Fourth of July? It's complete! D: Gahh. Stupid I must be.