| Reviews for The Broken Miko |
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Carlynul chapter 12 . 10/12 I love this story! The character progression is very well done as well. You've done an amazing job of portraying how these two characters progress/change without losing sight of who they are (a mistake I've seen so many make in stories that otherwise started out wonderfully but I couldn't finish thereafter). |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5 ... i also feel like they had sex to fast when sess didn’t even love her and we didn’t get the juicy details lol. But I just feel like this story wasn’t for me although I loved the development of their relationship even though sometimes it backtracked and sess still saw her as a half breed who shouldn’t be aloud to grace his bed even after having sex. Tbh I’m a very sadist being so I definitely wanted sess to feel the heartbreak kagome when she found out but no all I got was some petty jealousy although after they had sex she did say some really mean things to him but he did to he in fact told tht he would find a mate thts better experienced inpling tht she was indeed a bad bed even though he apologized to say tht someone who’s just given u their virginity is pretty heartless but ik she has said some things that pushed to that but all in all I’m not reading farther because I don’t wish to see them together *sigh* |
Guest chapter 21 . 8/5 Ok so ima stop here with this book for my own sanity lol. The plot of this story was beyond amazing and it kept me intrigued in fact I’m still intrigued but I refuse to read farther. So I understand the anguish in this story in fact I liked that part very much but that scene where sess decides to bed Nami kagome’s friend struct a heartstring. And yes ik it’s not considered cheating because they weren’t together but at tht time sess knew his attraction to her although he didn’t know the extent. He even treated her horribly when she found out with a face of I don’t belong to u I do as I please. And no matter of everything tht happened I can’t seem to get over it ... |
Noppoh chapter 30 . 6/3 A Hanyou Kagome! Love the idea! It's such a good depiction of her too, strong, a bit volatile, loyal, loving, etc. The story too was very intriguing. Sesshoumaru realising how badly he had treated a couple of gods, even though it was only a line in your story, was hilarious. I hope he learned from it, although I somehow doubt that :p |
Rokizol chapter 29 . 5/15 All I can say, thank you for this beautiful story! You possess great talent! This def. tops one of my fav stories. Thank you for this gift! |
Rokizol chapter 28 . 5/12 This chapter touched my very soul! The inuyasha’s last words scene was so SAD. It broke my heart and brought tears to my eyes. The fact that he’s happy that Kag found someone that loves her and protects her... unconditional love at its BEST! Not that he could do anything about it at that point, or at any point throughout the story but still his parting words could’ve been different... I LOVE THIS CHAPTER (all others too, but this one kinda just broke my heart) |
viviane.bonneau chapter 3 . 3/5 woah hardcore with all the deaths... |
jay90 chapter 3 . 9/16/2017 So sad and disturbing that the others had died like that, but I'm still interesting in how the story will lead... |
jay90 chapter 2 . 9/16/2017 Amazing story, so wonderful I'm highly curios as to what is going on, mysterious. |
marushumnluvr4eva chapter 30 . 9/10/2017 it took me awhile to start reading this story and now that i have it was worth the wait. this was a good story. it had an original plot and the characters were great. i loved how you kept sesshoumaru as himself throughout the story and i was surprised to see kagome as a hanyou. keep up the great writing. c'ya' |
Guest chapter 25 . 7/7/2017 I do believe that Kagome has forgotten her miko powers, I noticed she did not use them even when they would have been very helpful such as in the demon slayer village that tried to kill her. If I'm right they could be used against the Shadow creatures. |
Coolfire30 chapter 30 . 6/23/2017 i love you so much for writing and finishing this... i love it... i love the story and i most definitely love how you plan to write a sequel... thank you... |
KairaB chapter 5 . 3/24/2017 I have a question. Why did Sesshoumaru insist on Kagome going to this particular village instead of another less dangerous village along the way like she suggested? Was he trying to teach her a lesson, have her killed by a third party without getting his hands dirty or just for his own sick and twisted sense of "shits and giggles"? |
Marie-S-Raven chapter 30 . 2/18/2017 I liked this a lot. Well stories with this much angst aren't usually my thing, this was still quite enjoyable. Thank you for writing! |
Marie-S-Raven chapter 30 . 2/14/2017 Yay! I love it, thanks so much for writing it! |