i didn't see the errors sorry .and did spock get to sicbay with the chess set

Awesome. Thank you. I could believe this. Cool!

This is...wonderful.

It always amazed me that the first meeting of Kirk and Spock's parents was so thoroughly monopolized by a crisis...I wondered what would have happened if it were just another day on the Enterprise...

And this, my friend, is what I imagined.

You...you get a slash cookie.

i feel very bad for kirk

that has got to be one of the most aquard conversations he has ever had

A great story. Very funny.

Nice although i think the ending is slightly out of character. However it was a nice fun read that i could read again and again.

WHOO! PLEASE CONTINUE WIT DA STORY! Update soon please?

Brilliant! I loved this fic! Great job! and poor Kirk...lol

good, funny

What an interesting concept and a most delightful story, it certainly made me smile! I can just imagine Sarek racking up the statistics in his head and Amanda being overcome with curiousity.
Nicely done.
jenolas

Very cute little bit of pre-slash there. Hope for more along that vein soon.

Tanithriyudo! Wonderful to run into you again somewhere new. This is the AAK/SA webmistress. Is this finished? Or is there going to be... drumroll... *romance*? ;-)
At any rate, whether it's done now or not, we'd love to post it when it is. You remember the site, right? :-) If that's okay with you, of course.
~Farfalla
blueberrysnail

That was lovely! Nicely written, well in character and very believable. Sme of the turns of phrase are lovely and memorable... 'voice an octave too high even to his own ears'... Please continue! If not this particular fic, then writing K/S. You're very talented.
Please excuse me being pedantic here... your first two sentences have two grammatical mistakes, 'laid' should be 'lay' and 'went' should be 'gone'. I think you let yourself down here, because the rest of the grammar is perfect, it just gives a rather bad impression when your only slips happen to be on the first line! Sorry to be impertinent... please believe me when I say that I've only pointed these out because the rest of the fic is so good and it's a shame that it doesn't begin quite so well as it continues.
Having said that, may I reiterate how much I enjoyed your fic and how much I hope that you'll continue writing. (And if you like K/S, .com is the best collection of non-graphic K/S about.)

It is not finished, right ? I mean I would love to read a sequel.