A great story. Very good.

Wow, just WOW, so good. One of the best short one-shots I've read.

interesting...I like, really good

What awesome insight into the minds of these four characters! Very nicely done.

Wow. That really kicked some ass. Great job.

whoa! that was deep, :)

This is a very interesting insight into the four main characters. Poor Wes. He never can be happy, can he? And Gunn. He's paid dearly not to be Charly (as in Flowers for Algernon). I would have liked to have seen Lorne's POV as well.

Ooh, that was sad. Yes as the season is winding to a close, things still seem so unfinished. This is what I love most about Joss Whedon's series, they have such feeling to them.

Oh, what a great way to start the day! This is lovely, beautifully written (as always), so good that it brought a lump to my throat. If this makes me go out at lunch to buy the Angel DVDs, I'm sending you the bill!
Thanks for sharing and making me smile. You're the best!
Melody