OMG your story is sooo goood i always have to cry when i read how the bastard hurt her! Sometimes i really hate him for killing hector! But at the end i cry when he is killed by paris! You wrote it soo good i always cry! If YouTube just could wrote it to the end! And make an AU! Kill briseis! I know thats cruel but i think she just didnt deserve the dath of so many people she loved! I want achilles to suffer!because he killed hektor! (You Know i love hector)

Arghhhhhh no! This bit breaks my heart every single time but you've written this story so beautifully! :)

love love love. best troy fanfic yet. /3

I absolutely adore your story, your writing style and creativity in using the movie as your skeleton, but giving it an enlightening edge that is purely your own!

I remember watching Troy for the first time many years ago, and fell in love with the Briseis/Achillies coupling. Then a few days ago I watched the movie again on TV and fell in love all over again.

I hope that you may be able to fall in love long enough to finish this story, because it would really be a shame to stop when there is so much potential and beauty to be continued..

I sincerely hope you try to finish this story because it is brilliant!

Great job, very believable and wounderful insight into the characters

hey are you still going to continue this story?

i think this is great how you write the whole thing is very good..

i love it!

i love this chapter! I love the dialog! I love how he admits it without admitting.

Excellent. At first, i thought it was just a retelling of the events that happened in the movie. I'm glad i continued to read on because i love how you've developed the characters and added extra scenes of them together during those few days leading up to Patroclus death. I really like the dialog between the two, especially how she pushes him to admit his feelings for her.

It's a pity that you haven't updated in years because this is a great story.

such a cute story! rawr! you should update sometime!

EXCELLENT

So I read this story in a few hours today and got my heart broken because I saw that you haven't updated since September of last year. I'm not sure if you'll update again soon, or at all, but I hope you do. Because this is a wonderful fic that deserves to find its ending. Everything about it is perfect: grammar, plot, character development. You are a great writer and I hope you can find it within yourself to continue this story. I can't wait until the next chapter-Kiora Storm.

OMG j'adore your story! keep going and update soon!

One word for chapter five, DAMN! That was good! I gotta give ya props on that, I learn from all of these great chapters I'm just starting out you see. So, I'm just taking notes. Keep it up, I wanna learn more, cause I suck at writting love scenes too. Nice job.

I urge you to continue this wonderful story! Its far from the others my favourite on!

It is utterly beautiful. The pain is wonderfully painted, and the emotions are well defined. Though Paris should not have the burden of Hector: Priam had 50 children, of which Hector was the oldest and Paris the youngest. Update soon.