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Really enjoying this story!

This is a very interesting, very good story. Could you please add chapter 6 to it and continue to the end? I am curious if the virus that is now in Colonel Hogan will create the venom needed to save the lives of many people.

Dang... love this thing... don't suppose you could update it? Please?

A very good story. I can't wait until Chapter 6 is up and the rest of the story. The story makes me wonder if there really is a virus like you describe in the story. It would be deadly if it were true.

Awesome, love it what else is there to say rather than please keep at it.

good job

Oh man this was really going to be a great story. What happen, why did you stop writing? Being in the medical field made this story feel right at home. Biological warfare is still a fear today and this story having the heroes fight the newest biological threat the only way they can is a nice change for their normal types of missions. Please take up this story again soon.

you should really finish this fic, or let someone else finish it for you if you don't want to. I think it's really, really good.

G. Kinchmeyer

finishing?

Um, hi? Writers block much?

I think I may have read a story like this but I can't be sure if it was HH or Sherlock Holmes or some other. For some reason I keep thinking back to it and the character was doing something similar to what Hogan is trying to. That story was complete if I recall and at the end the contact turned out to be a traitor and wouldn't give up the antidote. Then the allies come and save the character and all is well. Your story reminds me of it cuz you seem to be trying to do the same thing. It'd be really exciting if you finished this. Update soon!

Hello, awesome writer!

I know it has been a year and a half, but PLEASE START WORKING ON THIS AGAIN! ( You'd make LOTS of readers VERY happy! *g* ...me for instance... *g*)

This story is brilliant! Your plot is just great and something I've never read about.

It is really well-written. I spotted two minor mistakes, though. I hope I won't sound too unkind but constructive. A story as great as yours shouldn't have taken any of it's splendidness away by some minor things like those:

The first one is in Chapter 3, line 5 ( when Schultz is counting): The German word for "two" is "zwei" and not "svei" (I'm from Germany, so I couldn't help but notice.)

The second one is in the second chapter, when Sam explains to Hogan how the virus works: He sais that "it's delivered as bacteria cultures". That's contentwise wrong, because an illness can only be caused by EITHER bacteria OR a virus. Viruses and bakteria are not the same. Viruses are the kind of pathogens that invade body cells to reproduce themselves while bacteria are cells (or rather one-celled living organisms) themthelves.

So the simple solution to this little problem would be to say something along the line of "It's delivered in bacteria cultures, simply spread on food... Once the bacteria are ingested, they reproduce the virus until they burst and the virus spreads in the body..."

I think you should go back to your story and fix those mistakes. Perhaps you'll be in the mood for writing some more chapters after that... ( selfish of me - I know, but still!)

Man, you have just GOT to finish this story. It is so good! I've reread it a few times, and each time, I am so disappointed that this is where it ends! I hope you decide to continue! (Please?)

Hey...this is awesome! PLEASE continue, i was all wrapped up in the story and..and then it just stopped! *sniffle* PLease! Post more SOON!

continue please