I had no idea Percy was so complex ;) So interesting!

I love this...I love this. I don't think I have ever read a one shot like this that has described the way the pressure to be perfect is so trying and useless in such little words. I guess, in many way, I can even see myself in what you have described. Great job! REally!

Wow. This is...amazing. Really. I love the use of present tense. I can see everything in this fic so clearly, you wrote this very well. Wonderful job!

*tears* no one should be perfect. I thought he'll be empty. after all in the end when you try and be perfect you get nothing back! (

Wow.

This is really great.

I like your writing style for this one, it really fits quite well. Love the last note.

Any more Percy fics? I absolutely adore him and you've written a great side of him that not everyone sees. I hope to read some more of your stuff. Keep it up!

-Saturn's Hikari

This is a wonderful piece of writing. Very introspective, very profound. Thank you for posting it.

I read this earlier, but it wouldn't let me review. Another Percy lover, yazoo! This is good, it truly captures Percy's misunderstoodness. I like the last bit, it's eerie. Good job, this is brilliant!

Beautiful. Simply enchanting. 'Enuff said.

*stares* Wow. I think this is your best one. I don't know what inspired you to use the present tense, but it works! Really works! I like how this isn't really the "evil" or even super-angsty Percy, but just this fairly innocent kid who's trying to do his best, with just this shadow of what it will cost him. Wonderful!

First off, thanks for reviewing my story, I really appreciate it!

Secondly, wow. This piece was amazing. I love Percy, though the fifth book kind of rained on that parade. I absolutely adore your portayal of him, with his striving to be perfect and his ignoring of his imperfections. After all, if he doesn't acknowledge his imperfections, they don't exist. The end was magnificent. Fantastic fic.

One error: In the second paragraph you use the word "interrupted", and I think you mean "interpreted." Just a typo, I'm sure, and the only flaw in this entire, wonderful piece.

...Very nicely done.

I hardly even notice that it's short! LOL. I didn't catch any grammatical errors that really stood out. The general flow of the story from one idea into the next is on a borderline between being perfect and a little choppy, but it's written well, so don't worry about it.

A nice reflective piece here, I really ejoyed it! Nice work.