Ok, It's been many years now and I figured you're not going to finish this story (I'm wishing you would). You probably don't log onto your fanfic account either which mean you wont see this review (I'm hoping I'm wrong).

I've been going through my fanfics account and I ran across this story again. I really loved the chapters I've read and so many years later still hope you would finish it.

Good story but you got to update now b/c it's been so many years already!

Yeah... I'm gonna need you to update this story. Its been how many years

Amazing story! Love TxP

I Love this story.. Trunks is being sensitive is a very good thing to me. I want to know why he is sensitive and the real reason why he want Pan! Hurry up and UPDATE! You haven't UPDATE in 2 years already. UPDATE! please

erm yh y did u stop nwriting this it reli gd plz continue plz plz plz plz

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Shouldn't you give credit to the movie you are basing this fanfiction on before you write the story?

Write more, please...pretty please? ;_; please please please? Trunks is so funny in this story, I cannot help but laugh at some parts. =) Keep up the good work!

cant wait 2 see wat happens next please update soon

this is a good story. trunks is a little crazy but I can't wait for the next update.

That was seriously cute. :]

Please update soon.

VxS

omg..! wat a great story. its alsome. you should like update it soon cause it seems like you havent updated foe a while now so please update soon cause like i REALLY wanna know wats gonna happen oka?

UPDATE SOON!

almost identical to " he was cool" the korean movie.

the story is good, but so far all i can see is u ripping it off from the movie.

please explain this if this was not ur intention.

its good so far and i hope you keep going. one question though, why have you made pan and goten unrelated?

LOL. I loved this Chappy. Very entertaining. Please Update soon; I want to know what happens next! Very exciting story. This is going in my favorites. Please UPDATE soon!

~LunaBela~