Loved it! Great ending..

Love it! I've always hoped they would make a OUTIM sequel..

This is one of the best OUATIM stories on the website. I love the story up to the end of Chapter 10. Some time you might consider re-writing Chapter 11a and 11b. Sheldon would not trust the CIA after the incidents surrounding The Day of the Dead. They left him on his own. I think it would be more reasonable to assume he would stay in Mexico.

cohones is Italian for balls

Please make a sequel. I'm a late reader, I know, but this was excellent. I loved it and you kept the people in character well. I even loved the 'atta\ck against Sands' plot, very nice. Please amke a sequel and you can be sure I will read it and review every time.

I loved your fic. It's great: lots of suspense, all characters stay the way they are, nice style. I'm really looking for sequel.

well this is good i can't wait,the suspense is killing me...good luck

0_0! *cries* I'm sorry! I haven't reviewed. . *counts* four chapters! I feel so bad! And now it's finished. . . . .*sniff*

Well, on better terms, it was a great story! I loved it! And you had better make a sequel for it! ^_^ Me love Sands! I hope you get the inspiration to write it! And I bet it'll be just as good as this story. ^_^ See ya!

*Charm65*

oh. i need a sequel. do you think you could add in el...i luv 'im. our fave mexican mariachi!

suffering from major lack of sleep and jet lag from an 8 and a half hour flight from Vancouver to home in England...I thought I'd see how much you had written while I was away before collapsing and I am so pleased that the story progressed so far and so well. I hope there is a sequel, I'm really into Agent Sands right now.

While I was away I started my own OUATIM fanfic but I don't know whether it's good enough to be submitted really...hmm, I'll think about it. Anyway, I'm rambling...put it down to tiredness. Thank you for such a wonderful story, I look forward to reading more of your work. *collapses in front of her new JD poster*

*sniff* Its over. Its already over...

Very good story. Your Sands is...well...SANDS. *grins*

Yeah. Being Evil can be fun... But then, you attract more EVIL! *lol*

I would write your English paper...But, ALAS!, I am French-Canadian. XD

A Sequel would be nice. *misses El already*

Sly ^^

Ah NO! I can't believe that El would betray Sands like that! How dare he (yah I know Sands can be a bit... grumpy sometimes, but who couldn't love him!). You have to hurry please, or I fear I shall not be able to go on much longer!

-Rachel

...

EVIL!

*gah!*

That was a truly evil cliffhanger! But it is a GREAT point to stop and leave us begging for more.

I hear and obey.

MORE!

Sly ^^

AH! Who shot? Who's going to die? Not a cliffhanger, I beg you!

Come on, El. Don't betray Sands! *silently (or not so silently) cheers on characters*

Good chapter! Keep up the excellent writing!

wow! poor sands. how can el do that? maybe he's planning something. anyway, another great chapter. update soon.