 Pheonix09 1/5/10 . chapter 1that was cute and well written, you should make a sequel. Please tell me if you do. |
 Anyjen 10/1/08 . chapter 1So cute! Gotta love an agsty piece with a happy (cheerful!) ending full of innuendo. :3 |
 Axel's Ashes 6/5/08 . chapter 1Oh god, that was freaking hilarious! I enjoyed reading it immensely!
Much lovesquiggles! |
 Jonetsu 10/1/06 . chapter 1God that was great! I have to be honest, at first it was mushy of Kurama to blurt out his undying love, but...damn! That last part rocked my world! I love you right now! |
 Ja ne Kat 8/16/06 . chapter 1lol. too cute. not very many stories wit these two can you go aw after, go hiei, put that fox in his place. |
 Yami no Kokoro 4/6/05 . chapter 1ooh! I like this. The whole 'Hiei comes back from the Makai and Kurama confesses his love' thing is overdone, but you managed to find an air of originality in it that made the used idea worth rereading.
I love how Kurama just acted on instict-so elated that Hiei had returned that he just told him everything without thinking.
Hiei's reaction was also really nicely done. Usually either he breaks down and admits his love too, or he completely rejects Kurama. The kind of *shrug* 'Ok, sure.' thing was very cool, and when I think about it very what I would expect from Hiei.
Nice job.
YnK |
 Tatsutahime 8/17/04 . chapter 1LOL, very cute, without being over mushily so. |
 Touya4me 8/16/04 . chapter 1Cute! Wow! That was really awesome! |
 Kita Kitsune 8/15/04 . chapter 1lol ^^;
started out all sad and melancholy . . .
but the ending was so kawaii!
^^; eheh . . .
no, honestly, but this was really cool.
=^-^=
a nice lil one-shot you got here . . .
so nice, in fact, that I'm returning the favor for you writing it by giving a review!
^^;
lol ( aren't I twisted? )
-.-# sigh . . .
eheh! ^^;
well, good job and ja ne, Flame-san!
- Kita-chan peace out =^-^= |
 fanficreader 8/13/04 . chapter 1 ok...SO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I HAVE TO KNOW!:P |
 shadow priestess 8/13/04 . chapter 1Heh... kawaii! Yes, random, but still good! |