This is really nicely written and I'm excited for the rest of the story!

I've read this before... So why am I so choked up about Glorfindel and Lothiriel not getting to hug one another goodbye and the fact that they won't ever see one another again?

first chapter looks promising

Yeah... I am sorry. I can't. The story seems to drag nowhere and I am sure there is nothing to make it good in the future. Beginning was bad, then it was good and now again it is bad. I think you chose the wrong road for your story from the very beginning, because I feel like, no matter what you are telling in the story, your character does not have any particular reason to be in this world, she has nothing mystical about herself. No powers. No interesting mystery. Nothing.

The story is way too long, and with the way you created Boromir loveline I am 100% sure there is nothing for me here. She already met Eomer, and for some reason he already irritates me. I don't know why.

I had hope for the story, but now I have an angry urge to go and read some real book, to erase the feeling you gave me. I am disappointed snd sad.

Ps. This is my personal opinion, don't take it close to heart, I am sure there are a lot of people who love this story, but it is not me.

Wtf...Why make a child story into something so dark? I don't see a redemption for the story, because I assure you there is no light in the future and if there is, you don't even realize what you have written about.

Okay, I am confused. I didn't see it coming. At all. Why? Just why? It is written well, but I don't understand why it would be here. No logical explanation in my mind. Isn't it a dishonorable thing? I didn't feel any connection between them and out of nowhere, it exists? I understand, they are traveling, too much sadness on their way... But really? Really? Now, you really have no right to kill Boromir off, if you will, there is no logical sense to it. And it is good for opportunities in the future. Complications I would say. I hope he will live. If not, I just don't understand.

Much freaking better. Now I feel bad for leaving the first comment, but I was very agitated by the beginning. I just hate beginnings in this kind of stories "girl from our world falls to Middle Earth". I always hate beginnings, they are such a walking cliché.

Okay, okay. I see you. It is much better now.

My first impressions are not very good.

Your writing is okay, but first thing I did not like about your writing is the way you describe your character. Why? Because it is all in one passage, and for me, only unprofessional writers do it like that. It is a bit awkward.

Second thing. Your dialog. Illogical. The way she just tells Aragorn 'I am from another world and I know everything about you'. Like, why? Why would anyone believe her? Even if she has verbal proof.

Really, it is not very original. Better if the character was from another world, but not from our world. And I still cannot imagine how will she be a part of the Fellowship, having no skill but knowledge. (I do hope you have something in the pocket, like, if she tells what happens it will be differently, or she cannot tell because some power forbids her) If not I will be greatly disappointed.

Third. Reaction to her person. No one freaking looks at the way she looks? Her clothes? Appearance? Her manner of talk is not that different from anyone, which is a Huge mistake.

Also, one of the problems that is greatly bothering me is will she be taught how to fight? Why not put her in the world earlier from the books, and give her a chance for something more? Because teaching while traveling is bad, no one has time for this. Too cliché.

Whatever, I will give this story a chance, I will go and read more, and I hope it gets better and my questions are answered by the story. But I was disappointed by the begging and its unoriginality. (I was so excited when I started...)

I am glad to see someone took a practical approach to the effect the ring would have on the main character. But, I have always pitied Boramir. I hope you spare him when the time comes in the story. I always find it interesting to see how an author decided to write Bormair in the uncharted territory of his survival. I find it much more exciting and challenging then following the regular canon of the tales with no unique touch from the fan fiction author.

so far I am really enjoying this story. I can tell that English is not your first language but the way you "speak" i guess is very appealing. IN a way you have a better vocabulary then a native English speaker. OR I mean to say your imagery and the way you tell your story is very clear in the mind of the reader such as myself. I do not get confused and have to re-read a paragraph to understand or picture a scene you have described. I am also looking forward to another cultural perspective on this sort of story. So far I am quite fond of your main character. :)

So far I am loving this story! I am very pleased to find such a long fic, as this will keep me occupied for quite some time.

This writing is so concise and informed. I don't know anything about legal matters, really, but it's clear you knew what you're doing. Also, I just wanted to review because the Anne McCaffrey reference had me perking up.

This first chapter alone wowed me - the research that went into those details (and how naturally that research comes across) and your style of writing. Can't wait to read the rest :)

You know that A/N to Eilenach, that felt like you were asking your assistant to re-shuffle your dentist apponintment :D