this is an incredibly well written story and on this site that's saying something in my book. there are also very few spelling issues and no inconsistencies or bad grammar. as you can see I have certain standards and you met each and every one of them and then some. I can't wait to read the next one sadly I need to be up in 3 hours

I noticed you changed up the order of the quidditch matches and honestly I think I like it better this way

Also I really love that you're having harry use his brain as opposed to acting like ron all the time

I have a strong inkling harry is going to be told the marauder's were animagi and then hear the story about how sirius got caught and he's gonna figure out Pettigrew is scabbers

I love the way this story went. Harry really made sure that Fudge had to do the trial rather than the kids jumping to rescue Sirius and him being on the run so much. I like it. 3 patroni...hmm. I do like the idea and hope he manages to keep them all while learning how to control overpowering them and exhausting himself all the time lol. Of course Pettigrew got away. The Ministry never does things right (because an anti animagus ward is so hard to have for their cells) and is backed by DE's.

Thanks!

Dear ksomm:

Just thought I should mention: It should be "Dogs like chicken, right?" "Dog's like chicken" is quite a different statement.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Thank you for this story. I found it a good read with an original plot.

I really enjoyed this story! I loved how Lupin called Harry his cub and how Sirius called Harry pronglet! It's a cute idea.

I enjoyed the story, but I think that everyone is acting out of character. Harry is much stronger than this, and Ron isn't a fool, but a fiercely loyal friend. I think Harry is going through an emo phase which he went through during the fifth book, but for different reasons. Overall I'd say the story is ok.

Great story!

This was cute!

Harry suing Fudge. Priceless.

That howler has ALL THE WINSAUCE.

This was a really great story, but very hard on poor Harry! Thank goodness for happy(ish) endings!