Hmm. Little Glory is pretty frightening in this story! It's interesting to think about how Ben learned to deal with Glory as he was growing up. Perhaps you should write a series about him dealing with her presence at various points in his life?

Now this I like.

Very interesting idea. i love the wya you've written glory- a bitchy little girl who sends her therapist mad. Like it.

A great, frightening little ficlet.

Good job. Very original idea.

this was so uber cool! i loved the originality and perspective. definitely going into my favourites!

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It was a good, interesting piece. I've been trying to get someone to write a Ben/Glory pastfic for a while, and this is an interesting take on one. It might have been nice to see Glory as more childish, since as a young woman, she seemed like a young woman, suggesting her age might have some affect on her personality. The brain sucking is definitely interesting, though, and it was well-written, save for a bunch of grammatical problems in the first paragraph. You might consider going back and fixing the tenses in the first paragraph... it really lowers the standard your writing sets in the rest of the fic.

Not a bad story. I like it when we get to see some of the backstory of relatively unexplored characters like Glory or the Mayor. However, Glory seems to be able to communicate with Ben in this fic, as well as have a bit of his memories, which she clearly didn't have before (note how in "Weight of the World" she talked about suddenly gaining memories of Ben's childhood, and how it was the first time she remembered pain). Of course, I suppose it's possible Glory could communicate with him and Ben just generally didn't respond. Could have used a little bit more insight into Ben's thoughts, though. Not much, but a little would have helped. Nice job, though.