You can't be joking right? O.o !

Please finish this story :)

It is wonderful, I want to know about telling her father and when Jack comes back. You need to end it, you must, and please if you will I would be grateful to you.

Wait... I'm desperate that you need to finish it. There are still people reading and love to read the next chapter(s) as do I!

You're good and amazing in writing I beg you please continue :D

With sincere greets

Rachelle

I still love this story so much - makes me laugh out loud. And I would so love to see you finish it!

AERYYYYYNNNNNNN! Nearly 7 years and you've not finished this? LOL

Enjoyed it very much, anyway. ;-)

This is by far the most hysterically funny Stargate fic I've ever read. I was literally laughing so hard my sides hurt through the whole thing! I know you haven't updated in years, but you HAVE TO finish this, please! :D

This is a really incredible story. I love it. The characters are so really well written the whole story is. Just have to love it!

Aw come on Aeryn, please finish this story. It's been such a fun read. I love your stuff on Heliopolis as well, Witch's Brew is one of my faves.

Holy Hannah

AH! SUCH MEANNESS! I understand getting tired and stuff, but why, oh WHY end it THERE?

your story called- it said finish me

Well that was a terrible place to end a wonderful story!

I laughed out loud, had a tear or two in my eye and smiled a whole heck of a lot. You have a wonderful facility with dialogue.

Then I saw the TBC at the end of chapter 12 and no more story and I was ready to cry for real. Is the end published elsewhere (I know it has been years)?

wow, that was full-to-bursting, so much going on.

haha, going for the breaking-it-to-him-gently tactic then :)

ok, worried now.

ok, i guess she was definitely in the mood then :)

Refreshing change, very well written :)