This is so sad!

I almost started crying! Good job, not many things can do that.

ouch... i just... owww TT_TT

Ahh, this just tears at my heartstrings.

I'm crying. I'm actually sobbing right now. This is. Nope. Not possible. Nopenopenope. I can't even. This nope. Beautiful. Sad. Nopenopenope

Hi! I hope you don't mind that I went back this far to review, but it was your only piece rated T.

"Wringed" should be "wrung". There are a few other grammatical errors within the piece that could be solved just by having someone take a thorough look.

I really love the way that you've captured Molly's pain. I like the way that she's mentioning how she was kind of like a surrogate mother to him, and how her feelings towards him are just like those she has towards her other sons. I also really like the jealousy that you mention- it's a nice touch.

The conversation between molly and Remus was really sweet, and super sad. I like the way that they're both concerned for each other, and in a way, they're consoling one another.

A good, emotional piece.

A very sweet and poignant story. I think it is fitting that Molly and Remus would be the ones to prepare his body for the funeral. Molly was his surrogate mother, as you said, and Remus was Harry's link to his parents.
Good job with your editing - I couldn't find any SPaG errors, although I did find a few small things that interfered with the flow of the story. I think that you used ellipses a few too many times, and commas or full stops could have been used in their place, which would still indicate hesitation or a pause while a character was speaking.

I'm really sobbing at this moment , please , please could you do harry meeting his mum and dad after this .Then maybe molly coming to heaven , then remus . it would be so cute. Anyway great job! :) :) :)

I am bawling now :') That was just, so sweet and sad. You wrote it perfectly, I loved it.

wow, I love this. Oh god, I feel tears.

Awe this story made me cry a little, it was so touching.

A sweet, beautiful story. Very realistic. sniff, sniff

Very well written! Sad nonetheless, but beautiful :)

Nicely done. Made me tear up a bit.

Good, that was so beautifully sad. The song bittersweet symphony came to my mind. It made me cry so much. It was amazingly written. The thing about him looking peaceful in death was an amazing idea. I like that it was Molly and Remus as they were the closest adults to Harry. The was it was all described was brilliant.