Reviews for CAPTIVE IN THE HEART OF A WOLF
Pugs in Paris chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Aww, how sweet . Nice story!
chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Wow this is really really good. I saw that Chaos-and-Serenity reccommended you, so i started reading- and now i wish to read more! on with the next inu one-shot!
LadySword04 chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
One word. . .WOW! This was so great! Everything blended flawlessly! I definitely enjoyed reading it too! Even though I haven't seen the later episodes, you capture the "change" in Kouga in terms of what human lives mean to him after meeting with Kagome, and his relationship that develops as a result of it (that you described in a review you recently left me) extremely well. I understand what you mean better now (and I will go back and change the 'problem lines' in my own fiction). This was truly beautiful and very well done! The ending was neat too, a promise from Kouga to Kagome, a nightmare of hers and a kinder/softer Inuyasha, and the lone howling in the distance that is probably none other than Kouga himself. Not that you need to hear it from me, but this was incredibly good! I am really looking forward to more one shots from you!

Lisa
Chaos-and-Serenity chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
You reveal the simplicity of beauty in your words. Never let go of that.

Lovely...Thank you.
Ixion Goddess chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
What a chilling ending...

I love this one shot, the scene when he is cradling the flower thinking of Kagome is so sweet! You have great style! I only reccomend to proof read some sentences, as some of them run on. Otherwise your use of punctuation is great, good job!

Keep on writing, I cant wait to read more of your writing in the few days to come :) and thank you for the review, it was very heart warming _

love and inspiration,

- Ixion Goddess
whiteswan chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
I liked this very much. Kouga always strikes me as a jerk in the series but you've captured a bit of a new side to him I hadn't seen before. I hope to see more of your work on Inuyasha soon.
PattyBones chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
A good short story.
chapter 1 . 11/17/2004
LOVE IT! Kouga is a wonderful, strong character, and I absolutely love him. If not for Miroku, he would be my first love in this anime! You capture very well Kouga's strong yearnings and desires; yet I wonder if perhaps his yearning for Kagome is more for her being a mate, in that she would be a bearer of his "pups" as he put it, rather than as a woman who would stand beside him. I think Inu Yasha, for all his whining, really sees Kagome as more an equal than perhaps Kouga would...interesting one-shot. RL2
suspend your disbelief chapter 1 . 11/17/2004
Wonderful...and a very accurate analysis of his feelings. Spectacular. _

...The ending was unexpected, and kind of creepy. You could, if you had wanted, turned this into a chaptered fic, with that kind of an ending.

..Skimpy clothing. xD; Ah, how true.

Again, great job! )
Jen23 chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
This was great! And yes she was prey for Kouga. I thoroughly enjoyed this brilliant piece of work from you, KSF! The description of the way Kagome looks was beautiful. It's also nice to know that Kouga is attracted to her for more than her looks. I bet he wished that little day dream he was having was true. However, Inu Yasha will not let that happen as he watches over his Kagome.

I'm looking very forward to more from you on this anime. Keep up the great work!
chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
ah, kouga... i have not yet read any kouga fics yet, but i know that this was a very good one. i'm not sure, but it is a little harder for me to see kouga being more compassionate, but it is understandable. about half of the fic itself is a summary of the episode where he was first met, and a few following episodes, so i wonder how far into the series this goes. kouga is an intersting character that i personally have a hard time getting into. i think you did well in keeping him in character and i hope to read more one-shots like this soon.
chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
i'm back again! - and i absolutely LOVED it! kouga is my role model. in stories i've written my character is almost always a wolf demon. tho my stories have been for yyh so kouga isn't in them... :( *sigh* but i love kouga anyway! so strong-willed and caring. *dreamy eyes* hehe. yup, definitely good lookin too. - lol. well, ill be reading more from you. you're one of my favorite authors. *really big toothy smile* i hope you write more kouga ficcies. ill be back. *evil grin* muahahahaha! - lol. byes! xP