Nice and descriptive. Your story was good considering that it was based on not really one of my faveorite episodes. Just a question is there going to be an indication of thoughts ?

I like your exploration of these two. Frankly, I was hoping that Paramount and TPTB would explore Jon's reaction to the Xindi arc more. This is a nice example of how he's more jaded than he used to be. Also, I like the idea that they're so alike it's almost scary.