that was good the ending almost made me cry

Sorry my review is *years* after you wrote this - but I had to tell you how much I enjoyed it. So beautiful - sad, sweet, utterly perfect. :) THIS is the life they should've had (rather than what the writers gave us :( ). Thank you so much for this!

A great end to the story. Very good.

Another great chapter. Very good.

A great start to the story. Very good.

oh my god its so sad! i hated it when baby elizabeth and trip both died in the end this fits so much better! it almost brought a tear to my eye. hope you continue writing such good stuff.

Great story! I wish the writers on Enterprise would read it and maybe get some ideas!

Beautiful story, sad but so very beautiful.

Oh WOW! That was intense...and very, very good. Thank you.

Sad ending, but a lovely story. In the first chapter, it seemed as thought T'Pol didn't even fit with her husband, but I enjoyed watching the change over the course of the story. Well done!

Thats such a sweet veiw of The Trip and T'pol relationship from the view of their children. The End was perfict but sad and wondeful all at the same time.

Ah that's just beautiful. I hope you write some more Enterprise Fic. Don't know if you've checked out the t/t section over at house of tucker dot com.

You did an excellent job with this story. It's a very sweet look into what Trip and T'Pol's family life could be like. Even if it does have a bit of a bitter-sweet ending . I hope to see more work like this from you.