Will you pick up and continue this story? : ( Though lookinh at the date it was 5 years ago...T T

It's quite difficult to find fanficts which are actually well written, interesting and have a strong independant and original OC TT

Hope you will finish writing this fictlet: )

This story is brilliant. You must start posting updates again! You can't just leave it like this! Please!

Hello! This is a fantastic story! Please update soon.

Yay! I must admit this is no the first new female manager story I've read (I beta'd a bit of one) but it's definitely one of the best.

When will you write more?

Hm?

*pokes you with a rose*

Woo! I love it :-D Please update as soon as possible

-XOmeNyou

I just discovered your story and I wanted to say how much I like it - I hope you are just distracted by school and are not abandoning it. It's very intelligent and well crafted. I like Connie - she seems like she could solve all the problems in the whole world, she's so competent and smart and sensitive. I'd like to know more of Erik's thoughts though. He seems too enigmatic, and Connie gets the upper hand with him too easily. But you're the author, and I just tore right through these first 17 chapters without stopping.

Finished chapter 17. I should have waited until then to write my review. We have different views of Christine Daae based on the ALW movie. So, forget my pleas from the previous review.

Your scenes where Erik spars with Constance are sometimes very interesting. When Erik is fiery, edgy and intelligent it reads well.

I just finished chapter 6. This is a well crafted story and I look forward to continuing. Since the story is largely referring to the ALW POTO movie in its current storyline and since I am a huge fan of the movie, I'd like to make a comment. In this chapter Christine tells Constance her history with the Phantom. She tells of her feelings at the time that she kissed him. Something about this doesn't ring true. In the end, her feelings for him were strongly mixed. He released her yet she returned to give back the ring and her eyes were filled with deep feelings, (I believe) of compassion and sadness. As she leaves on the boat she looks back at him with those same feelings still apparent. In your narrative these feelings are downplayed in her reflections. In fact, they seem almost nonexistent. I wish your story had allowed her to allude to those feelings in some way so that we know that she still has that beautiful soul.

Unlike many Phantom fans on this fanfiction site, I don't want to see Erik and Christine back together again. I love the finality of that last scene. I also admire your srong female character in this story. I love to see the Phantom challenged in matters of the heart.

I love this story. Everything about it. It's original, more realistic, and you're taking it nice a slow, which shows that you care about your story and characters. It just makes it all the more believable and enjoyable for the rest of us.

Constance is a wonderful OC! I can't get enough of the interaction between her and Erik, and I can't wait for the romance to begin!

Please update if you have the time. Thank you and good luck!

Katie

I really like this, its very different from what Ive read so far. I like that you don't have her jumping into bed right away..that being said, Will they kiss soon? haha PLEASE update soon, youre really good at this.

"She was a puppet on a puppet-master's strings and nothing more." That was a good point! I liked the weird sense between them.

As you can see, we are hunging around to see what will happen! Don't leave us this way...

I like the word play between Constance and Erik. Very intriguing and well written!

Hooray! I've been waiting for to update for ages! and I love, love, love Moonlight Sonata- I listened to it while I read this chapter. very nice. :)

WO! YOU UPDATED! It was worth the wait, but I do hope the next one will come more quickly. I need my regular dose of Phantom.

Oh, can't wait for the next chapter!