Noooo it's over:( and you haven't updated in literally forever!

This is interesting. I like it:)

I really enjoyed this what if, since I've sometimes asked my the same 'what if'.

I noticed this hasn't been updated in years, which is a shame since I'd love to know what would happen next

This looks really interesting so far

Nice chapter but the thing with shikamarus shadow and the dilema they faced could have been easily solved by them disarming temari tying her up to a tree and then shikamaru relising the shadow and them knowing her out.

It sucks that you haven't uodated in nearly a decade, but this is a really good story, and I'm so disappointed that it ended the way it did, at a cliffhanger no less!

I enjoy this chapter !

I like it .

Love this poem

Aaaaannnnndddddd we would never find out what would happen next. If Sasuke would leave after this or not. Damnit!

Naruto is the one who angry now...

I don't feel sorry for Sakura though.

I really with this would continue... :((

This is really good writing, hope at somepoint you continue this story

Ohhh, I soooo cannot wait to see what else changes! Butterfly effects for the win!

I never understood why Kakashi didn't just use the kage bunshin to train them both?

interesting. oh dear.

Of course, of all the places to get abandoned at, it would be here.

Still, it is a very nice take on how it could have not go SNAFU. I like how small changes were made and how you told us through the characters how large an effect they made.