Reviews for retribution
eccentricrabbit chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
*sniff* beautiful. sad. but very, very beautiful.
AgentRusco chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
very nice.
Be Summer Rain chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Now that I'm catching up with episodes, things are making a lot more sense.

This is wonderful and poignant and lovely and lots of good things. I love the style of this; the desperation comes across so clearly. And this line: and now God oh God (even though he doesn’t pray, he doesn’t sleep)

Beautiful. :)
chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Wow-I'm a huge fan of the X-Files (I started watching from the beginning) and I have to say that this is one of the best pieces of "One Breath" fanfic I've ever read (and trust me, I've read tons!). Great work!
Sohara von Salienta chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
::melts inobtrusively into floor::

That was so sweet, Nita. Amazingly so. Even for someone who hasn't been introduced to the X-Files yet, it was amazing. And I understood much of it, too-it wasn't the kind of thing that you wouldn't be able to understand if you weren't a diehard fan. Somehow, in the middle of this whole thing, I grasped what may even be only a hint of what Mulder and Scully are,, even though I knew next to nothing of them before reading this. Kudos, dahling. I told you, you're brilliant.
chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Gom.

Nita. That was so, so wonderful. Beautiful beyond words. Seriously. You captured Mulder!angst perfectly here. My even knows no bounds.

He studies it now, the way one would a fine painting, obsessively, and here’s his Mona Lisa. “Mulder, it’s me,” and he’ll close his eyes and pretend that she’s there.

Is my favorite line, but I loved it all.

Beautiful work! :D
silentsailor chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Wow. This is gorgeous. The characterization is perfect, wonderfully Mulder, and i am totally in love with the stream-of-consciousness sort of style. I just finished watching season two for the first time and am, candidly, too broke to buy three, so ficcage like this is awesome. Thanks for writing :)