That last lines always get me! I can't believe she named her fish Smirnoff.

Pretty awesome fic, I love the dynamic between River and Jayne.

Smirnoff! Love it! I totally want to have a fish and call it Smirnoff now :)

This story totally works for me.. if only because I too had a beta that lived in a liquor bottle and was named Jack Daniels. lol

Latecomer that I am, I'm really enjoying these! There's a poetry to them, to River's stream-of-consciousness. Also? I like how not everything is said - certainly not all at once. Really clever work! Thanks.

*giggles* Only River would name her fish after the label on the liquour bottle.

I loved the fish! River’s conversation with it was awesome, so funny (“He's a fish, says the fish.”) and sweet.

Hey I'm really enjoying this series, so please keep it up.

I like the way you have portrayed River as still being really nuts, you've done a great job on it, esp. the way she talks to the fish, and talks about the fish. Great use of symbolism between her and the fish. I think you've got her dialogue style down pat.

Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.

Wow, I'm really digging these. Can't wait for the rest. This one was my favorite so far.