Ughh too much cuteness, my heart jkdxkiode nkjdejikdeo *dies because this is so sweet* :')

another reason why I hate straight couples in anime. Girls are cheaters and whores *scoffs* They accuse men of cheating but go behind their lovers back and cheat themselves it's bull.

amazing, i loved it. hehe

oh my geeze soo cute!

Aww man, every time I read this story I simply love it. Its so cute. Its one I can most defiantly read again and again like it the first time I've read it. I only slightly wish that it was more then one chapter long or that there was maybe another version or it that was more drawn out.

OMG! Thats so beautiful! I love it! Love it! LOVE IT! *tears of joy* That has got to be one of the more cutest short story I've ever read. For once I truly feel like screaming 'Kawaii' even if most people hate when someone use a single word in another launge when the rest is English.

Sorry, can't think of another way to put, also; sorry for the spelling.

So KAWAII!

OMG that was soo cute! i loved it

T.T thats so beautiful! i like it! i like it a lot!

Very sweet! -

Aw...that's cute. I love it.

I loved this, Hiei/Yusuke is my favorite yaoi pairing and you've done a wonderful job. I hope to read more of your work soon.

Vedy well-written and heart-breakingly adorable. Brilliant job. _

Oh that was hot. Go YusukeHiei-ness, greatest yaoi couple eva y'all!

I loved it, it was a great story. Keep it up.

~Kira