Chao- That was interesting!

YChao- Aw, so Yugi doesn't die?

Chao- *to YChao* Shut up! *to author* it was a nice story!

i really like it so far. please continue

Great chappie! Update soon!

Nice job! Is there any more to this story? Or is it over? I hope it's not over... It's really awsome! Love it! ^_^ Continue writing! ^_^

Aw! Poor Yugi. Darn those thugs. *shakes fist at thugs* They're really mean to him..! You did a good job with the chapter. It's good that the cards were safe and sound after all. Your spelling is getting lots better, too! ^^ Well done!

Aww! That was cute! Was that the end? But...it was still cute!

Aww! It's cute! About previous chapters: chibi Yugi's so cute! I wasn't sure whether I was supposed to laugh or cry when he didn't know what a friend was, but I cried anyway.

His cards! Ahh! His cards! Poor Yugi!

Sad...but all that spelling mistakes are ruining the story...write another chapter.

Aw.. ;_; Poor Yugi.

Memories like that must be really hard on him. I hope his grandpa will be okay, though. He has his friends, but he's really just a kid, after all. Sounds good so far! Keep up the good work! =]

Awe... *sniff*... poor Yugi!

This is an excellent story. It's very well written, and I love the plot!

However, you might want to double check everything before you post. Sometimes you have a sentence that doesn't make much sense. It happens to the best of authors, don't worry; just make sure you've looked over what you've written or see if you can get a beta reader. Just some friendly advice!

~sugarpony

aw...poor Yugi. you do have a few spelling errors. like Kaiba and followed, just to let you know