You've no idea how much it means to me for Christine to finally come to her senses here. I seemed to be the only person in the theatre who saw that, in spite of all that nasty murder/obsession business, Christine belonged with Erik. It gave me physical pain to be surrounded by ardent Raoul fans. Kudos for setting the record straight!

I likes! Very nicely done. I'm a big fan of EC fluff. Mabey they could run to a house that Erik previously owned? Or they could run to Persia!

"Before he could finish, Christine kissed him full on the lips.He seemed shocked, but returned the kiss."

Now THAT's the way the scene should have ended. Uuh!

"She looked in the audience and saw Raoul crying like a little girl."

Trust me when I say I have NEVER laughed so hard in my life as I did on that point.

"He was a cold fish compared to the Phantom."

Except on this point again. xD

I loved this. Love, loved, loved!

Hmm, interesting. I like how he stopped singing because she kissed him, not because she took off his mask. It's a nice touch. It's different than the way I rewrote it, but I like it!