I love it. I don't see the horror, though. Certainly some very deep drama, but it's not quite as 'AH! OH MY GOD!' as horror, I think. It's really great.

That was an interesting story. I love Angel and Leron... they're cute. :-D

Yes, I've seen hello dolly before. I was trying during the whole movie to find which person was micheal crawford. Then me, sis, and mom found out at the end when he sang haha. Well, this is a great story. Keep it up, God Bless!

-Liane

*sniff* Although there was very little Erikness for your writing... I still really liked it and I can't wait for more of your stories... I think I've read all the Phantom ones... I could be wrong, though. I'll have to go check. Then I have an audition tomorrow... I have to go practice. I am singing "Think of Me"... go figure, eh?

I Despise Raoul

Temptress of Erik with licorice and M&M;'s

Me Likey! I didn't get chapter 1 at first, but then it dawned on me. I lahve it! but for now, chaio!

Erik wrote THE PHANTOM OF THE OPERA... and Raoul will come and watch... hm

It's almost like seeing Erik in drag, hearing and seeing Angel...

See, Raoul equals trouble for Erik... no two ways about it!

Ah, teenage love, and mummy's old lover... so many troubles...

Raoul always causes trouble for the women in Erik's life, doesn't he?

A curse will be laid on whomever hears the Angel sing...

So, they're back together... but new trials and travails will they endure?

Oh, very nice, very nice.

I'm with you in that I rarely like reading about the characters' children - but this was exceptional. Loved it.

It did seem to move a little fast; you could have easily made it twelve chapters and fleshed it out a good bit. But as it was, it was still pretty good. Thanks for sharing it. Now I'm off to see what else you've written.

**claps her hands and whistles**

Bravo! Bravo!

This story is so cute! I'm so glad you wrote it! :) Very, VERY good job!

-Sarah

aw its over ;_;