pretty good
keep up the good work!

WOW
thank u K!

I gotta say, I almost didn't read this because the summary looked a bit choppy and I thought this would be one of those stories where the entire 16,000 words would be in one giant un-indented paragraph. But I must say I'm glad I didn't just skip over this based on the summary.

I was happy to see the tried-and-true "someone got in an accident" plot device - always a good way to introduce some drama and angst. And while Eiri is a bit difficult to portray since his moods change so much, I think you captured both him and K quite nicely. The pairing just struck me as interesting because both Eiri and K seem like dominant personalities and I wondered what would unfold by sticking the two of them together...in other words, I wanted to see who'd crumble and sink to submissive first. And I admit I kind of giggled since K went pretty much from zero to sex in a minute. :)

As an end note, I can't say there's anything that should be changed - everything fits together and there aren't any holes or errors in the storyline. Very, very nicely written story.

It was so good it made me cry!

I'm glad he found K-san

omg this is so sad! T_T poor Yuki... I'm seriously crying right now after reading this...

Aw that was amazing...I'm jealous! You're really good!

Wow...I'm crying and I only read the first chapter. Very good! *wipes tears away*

Tee-hee! I like this pairing now! Very cute story!

OMG that was freaken awesome, and the thought of yuki in a wedding gown isn't so bad. keep it up!-

I would never thought of K & Yuki being a couple. There were a few errors here and there, but the story was very good. I like it a lot... and imagine Shu being a angel in heaven.. heaven must be bliss with him around...

I really liked this story. It made me sad at first, but I got happy by the end. You have alot of talent. Keep up the good work. The world needs more story tellers like you. Good job.

It was a really good story. Thank You for writing it.

Wow not that I actually got to finish it, I believe that I really like this story. I like the plot that you had for it and I really like the ending that you put on this. Really almost a tearjerker. I cant wait to read more of your...which I think I will do right now. *hugs*

wow I like the pairing you have going. One I havent read about and I like it. Although nothing is oging on yet it is good. Cant wait so read more.