Sarah: *raises eyebrow* eh? obito is living in Kakashi's sharingan? well... that's a new perspective i've not seen before. it adds a nice touch though.

great story really well written!

Kind of bittersweet, ne?

AGh. You portray each character so beautifully and perfectly!

Very nicely written and an interesting approach to the fusion of Kakashi and Obito. Just a few typos (that that's - fourth paragraph from bottom), but that is a minor thing in the flow of this story. It's good enough to stand alone as a one-shot (and perhaps it should).

m, poignant. (Relaxes) Interesting drama

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I like the simplicity of it. And the way you introduced Obito as another voice in Kakashi's head is definitely interesting. _

There's one thing I don't understand though: why is Kakashi going to die?

I'm a big fan of one-shots, those being my major output myself, and I have to say... I really wish I had written this one!

It's really good, i totally want to steal it and write my name all over it :P

Grum