What?! I thought Amy was his wife. Is it really his mother? His mom name is Margaret

short but good

Good job all around, especially for a shorter story :))) I enjoyed it thanks!

ewwww very interesting chapter! I know this has been finished for a while but it's very good!

awwww the enemy chapter, excellent :)))

chapter 2 was also interesting, kind of short, so I'm glad there's more :))) yay

a pretty spiffy first chapter :))) I'm interested and reading the rest :)))

You were very clear on what was the present and what was the past, so I had no trouble understanding that Tom was suffering a flashback. Which makes perfect sense seeing how this guy had traumatized him before. Thanks for writing.

It was a good plot but the writting looked as if it was done by a nine year old. No detail no fillers just straight to the point, which some times can be good not so much in this case. Well it wasn't bad

After reading your other story I just had to read this one as well. I like the way your stories deal with the past in the present (that makes sense in my head, I hope you know what I mean). Feels good with a happy ending too. But as usual I'm gonna suggest you to write more desriptions. Like, what are they wearing? How do they look? What are they thinking? Where are they, how does the place look? Assume we have no idea who they are, and your story will be even better than it already is. -thumbs up-

This was really good.

More applause, Tom makes a nice victim doesn't he? A pretty victim too.

~Eva

I really like 21 jump street, I love Tom (and of crouse Johnny Depp) and your story is really nice... I spreak French and I'm not fluent in English but I've understood almost everything !

"Félicatitons" ;-)

I really enjoyed reading this - it was of a good length and it was very exciting, and really well written. Thanks!

Nice story. It was a little short however, and perhaps a little more description would have been nice. Otherwise, great job!