Beautiful! By the way, you know the nurse who has a crush on Bobby? That's me! :)

I just saw this story. Good stuff the kind of story i like to read. Weird that we both used the name Joe for someone in Bobby's family...Have you finished it?

Geez, that was one of the saddest things I've read. Poor little Bobby. It's amazing he's turned out as good as he did...though we know he kinda has some "issues." Thank God he has Alex in his life, so he can lean on her. He must've been the saddest, scared little boy. Great portrayal of the horrible things he must've witnessed growing up.

Poor Bobby. Your writing is absolutely gorgeous. I feel so bad for Bobby. At least he DOES have Alex.

You made me want to cry with that.Poor Bobby having too put up with a Dad like that.

Aw. I feel so bad for his mom and him. Of course, I would love to throw his dad in jail, but you can't have everything. Good story.

you sure have a knack for making me cry. once more, great job.

it was so sad.i'm crying.very well writtien.

Dangit, haven't I warn enough people to not make me cry. Good work.

Bobby's father was an asshole. This is really well done. I feel bad for everyone involved except that son of a bitch who who couldn't keep his hands where they belonged and paid for it with his daughter's life. *gnashes teeth*

Aw, that was so sad - but really good. You wrote Bobby perfectly. Great job.