This is a really fun story. It's a real shame that it looks like you are not going to finish it. I especially liked the scenes between Tris and George.

This story NEEDS to be finished *whines* (not really) but seriously, you can't write a story this awesome and not finish =)

If you are still on fanfiction, please pm me if you ever update =D

Sincerely,

-WarriorKnight-

C'mon update please!

I love this fic and I need to know how it ends!

hey... i can't wait for the next chapter - please update soon

Good, fun, fun goodness, good funness!. Please come back and update this story! It's great!

T_T

depressing, why leave the reader in suspense.

I loved your first story, Violet Eyes.

Even though it has been a few years, could you maybee just finish the story off in 3/4 chapters? Thnx

ah! update!

Oh Gods! They're pregnant aren't they? Is Tris like in love with George because that would be really funny... I loved it! UPDATE SOON! Please...

Keep Writing (it was very good),

xxTunstall Chickxx

ah ha ha happyness ha ha little people comming ha ha happynes! keep writing!

you have improved since violet eyes (which i just read)

I like the fac t you incorporated circle of magic in it, except i'm only on book 2 of it so I'm worried it got ruined!

I love your story! UPDATE ASAP!- you haven't for 1 1/2 years!

Excellent, I usually don't like pure fluff stories but yours has... something that makes it special I think it's the Bria/Tris side story which I might suggest that you make the main story because I find it more interesting ::snicker:: "mulberries" ::snicker:: and also ... people don't get pregnant that easy you know. Are you going to introduce Jon to George? And is Roger non-existant in the universe? What about Alex? And if there is no Roger then are Roald and Lianne going to die young like the did in the books? I for one think Sandrey would make a good Queen. Is she going to start the riders and the schools?

**Why would you live anywhere else indeed?**

So...an update? Please?

That chapter was really good. This whole story is going well. I loved Violet Eyes, and I'm really glad you decided to do a sequel! Great job!

Very good, very intresting. But UPDATE. Please, have mercy on us and update, not even an excuse for not being able to write for a year. You left at a cliffy.

Seeking an update,

Brown-Eyed Fencer of Conte (flyery)