 lissysue 3/19/08 . chapter 9 Hi just found this story. Wow I loved it. John is one of my faves and he hardly ever gets any credit |
diff-r-ent-1 2/13/08 . chapter 9aw that was such a sweet story! i like john-stories ^_^ |
 epalladino 11/15/07 . chapter 9Very nice story of the younger John. Thanks, Beth Palladino |
 Chemical Girl 6/18/05 . chapter 9This is brilliant. I loved every minute of it. |
 numbuh 14 5/15/05 . chapter 9 excellent ending definitely probably true and great scenerio, john coming down from the mountain just about the same time the go up.
anyway will there be a sequel?
numbuh 14 |
 numbuh 14 5/15/05 . chapter 7 great chapter, god thats about the fourth time i've said the same thing to you but oh well thats cos it's true.
don't forget to update lost brother and W A S P when u can.
numbuh 14 |
 SeaCry10001 5/15/05 . chapter 9yeah i did. lucky sod you are...i only got 13 reviews for 8 chapters...and then i've finished it and now it's been taken off right before i could add the last 2 chapters...2 chapters! but i'll put em back on...hehehehehehe...
luv Olympics 2012 London (at the moment...) x x x o o o x x x |
 tweenyweeny 5/15/05 . chapter 9 yes i liked |
 AngelMouse5 5/14/05 . chapter 9Nice way to end the story.. love the bit with alan and gordon practically hugging him to death and then the others..
the bit at the end with Jeff was really well done, as poor John does get overlooked a lot.
Excellent story! |
 AngelMouse5 5/14/05 . chapter 8short but sweet - hey you wanted everyone reviewed! - and i love how John still thinks they didn't notice he was gone |
 AngelMouse5 5/14/05 . chapter 7okay, wicked, all the chappies!
Love how Gordon finally figured it out, gerat chapter.. |
 AngelMouse5 5/14/05 . chapter 6A chappie for little ol' me! WOW, thanks!
Love the flashbacks from the two brothers, it was erally ell done and it's the sort of thing that John would do for hislittle brothers.
I'm really loving where your taking this story, can't wait to read more. |
 numbuh 14 5/14/05 . chapter 6 great chapter, again. loved the bit about john taking the 'rap' for alan and gordon. so something he would probably do.
anyway, please update this fic and your other fic lost brother when u can. can't wait to see what happens next in both.
numbuh 14 |
 Princess Tyler Briefs 5/14/05 . chapter 6Aw *hugs John*! Poor thing. That's so like him though. I'm sure he adores his little brother and he'll do anything for them. Including taking the blame like that. Did he get in trouble with Jeff for turning their hair purple? I wonder if he'll get sick because he's out all night and not moving?
I hope you update soon! I want to see if something even worse happens to John. Will he end up running into a bunch of older kids doing something wrong and threaten to turn them in so he gets beat up? (that was random x.x). Will something else happen to delay Jeff and the boys? Only you know, but I'd really like to ^-.
-PTB |
 tweeny weeny 5/14/05 . chapter 6 o, poor john. my first thunderbirds fic adn i'm loving it. |