Reviews for Unfinished Business
Thisaccountmustbedelted chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
I think both sleeping with Mugen is the hook, line and sinker.
ganderp chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Oh god the obnoxious gigglesnort I just did when Jin admits to sleeping with Mugen too. Mugen sleeps with everyone lol.

Aside from that, I loved it! I ship FuuxMugen more, but this one was too sweet that I just love it 3
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Naw... So totally sweet! Mugen comes and leaves like a whirlwind. But Jin breezes in so suddenly, yet fits back into her life as if he were destined to... and everyone's slept with Mugen lol!
idonotwanttobehere chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
It's all I ever wanted... :')I love you.
Barkers chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Surprising! lol

"So did I."

Yeah I'd cry even more after that too, hahaha.
Swirly chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Lovely and touching... except for this bit that made my jaw drop:

"So did I." XDD
bobalina chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I'm afraid to ask about the particulars of Jin's and Mugen's...interaction. Eh. *cough*
EWEWEWEWEW chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
AW...TRUE LOVE! D
Rose Crowess chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
"Good. That's over with." Haha.. You actually managed to make that funny and in character instead of just vulgar like most people, so good job on that. Jin and Fuu were a little bit off, but it wasn't unbearable. Good stuff.
amwong88 chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
hm...interesting story. i've never read anything about this anime that was so in-your-face and blank before - which is a good thing because it seemed more realistic in a way.
Elva chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
LOL! So did I! That's so hilarious. Who wouldn't right?
Chanyasoy chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
ROTFL! That was so f-ing funny!

Jin: "i know...so did I." That was PERFECT!

*sigh* FUU, geez, don't you know? We've ALL slept with Mugen! For him it is simply his way of greeting 'hello, dear old friend!'

HAHAHAHAHA!

Thank your for that ~.
fraught chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
A nice pairing I don't get to read as often as I'd like, and you've made them so cute together! I'm not sure how I feel about Fuu's moodswings- while they are in character it has been 3 years- and at times the writing seemed a little rushed, but then you have Jin and he's so polite and still doesn't really get women and you KNOW he SO did sleep with Mugen.
AKA Hummer chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
I was debating whether or not I should review. I felt so hopeless lazy as I read the stories. But then I felt so hopelessly guilty that I clicked the backbutton and clicked one of your one-shots. Cus dude. They're awesome. Short, sweet, to the point. Love it to pieces. Especially this one, I think. I giggled a little when Jin said that he slept with Mugen too. Heh. Still amuses me... Anyway.. great job on the fics!
Renleek chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Gah!.. I am s-p-e-e-c-h-l-e-s-s... Oh how I wish every single word of this wonderful fic would come true EXACTLY the way you thought it!...*sigh*.. thank you!
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