So sad :'( you made me cry

terrible but great story

YOU SHOULD UPDATE SOON PLZ

a great story! i luv death fics! but the ending seems rushed and unfinished... still, great story!

WAH! THAT WAS SO SAD! I loved it! THAT WAS AWESOME!

Well written and suspenseful, but too sad.

Beth Palladino

What? That was a horrible ending! I liked the story but it was a horrible ending (mainly since I hate death fics)! You have to change the ending or something, you can't just end it like that. =O

OH NO! Try and make a different ending there again! Gordo and allie can't die! No it's too horrible! I cried! You made me cry - not like i'm accusing or anyhting but it takes a lot to make me cry, and the death of a Tracy does it. the horrible death of suffication or the slow death makes me cry. keep it up COSOASH!

LUV

Kathryn xx

Update, update, update! I need to know what happens.

Oops, that was the epilogue. You mean there isn't more coming! OMG! Lol. Oh well, no miraculous return for Alan. Fantastic story.

Oh my gosh! Thats so sad! Save Alan! Bring him back! You've made me cry! POOR GORDON. Help them! Help them quickly! Lol. Great story.

Wah! Cliffie!

Be nice & update ;D?

~Vorserkeien~

This has been a wonderful story. PLEASE do an update on how the family deals with all of what has happened. Poor babies to have to have to go through all that.

oh my god. that was so moving and touching. you nearly had me in tears and that's a hard thing to do. poor gordon, poor alan to for that matter. please add more or a sequel or something.

fantastic chapters,

numbuh 14

Please don't tell me that is the end. . . . Please tell me you are going to have a sequil or something else. . . you can't just leave it there!

Or can you?

No! OMG are they ok? o please update soon i need to know what happens! this i so awsome!