I have read this story over and over for years, it is one of the best written stories on this entire website, every category included. It has highs and lows, the characters are all fleshed out and real. The emotions and scenes are so easy to visualize because of your great imagery. You deserve so many more reviews on this, it is amazing.

I thought the Jedi Order merely discouraged romantic relationships, according to your story?

haha... I'm so glad she told Qui-Gon off... that was too funny.

I really like how Qui-Gon put Obi-Wan in his place.. .& the manner in which he did it.

It's ok, Valia, I understand... I would be drooling too hahah

Awesome story! Loved it!

A beautiful written love story.

-Joins Lia in drooling- that's alot of jedi muscle in one room , i don't blame her for being distracted, but who i wonder was the spectator in black,

haha i've had days like that, when everything just goes wrong somehow Poor Lia at least Qui won't hold it against her lol

Haha I like Ravi, young little too full of himself but a heart of gold, hmm and I'd volenteer to sit and listen to Qui Gon any time

Yay for hot Jedi Knights! I don't blame Lia for getting distracted I would be to!

I found this story a looooooong time ago, on a SW fanfic website in a world before I knew about (was there such a time?). I absolutely loved it! Loved it so much that I downloaded it onto my computer, and it's been there for years :)

I'm so glad to finally be able to review it. It's a fantastic tale, and the characterisation is fantastic. Valia is a very likable OFC, flawed and interesting. And Qui-Gon! Oooohh Qui-Gon... You write him so well. I've fallen in love with him all over again. The build-up is mind-boggling, and so damn satisfying! Fantastically executed :)

Well-written, well-paced and hot hot hot! Fantasic work, thanks so much for sharing, from both 8-years-ago me, and from present-day me :D

Oh... My... God...! I have been looking for this story for YEARS! I read it so long ago that I don't even remember the name of the original web-site and now... out of the blue, here it is! I bow to your awesome-ness!

THIS IS THE BEST QUI-GON/OC STORY EVA! U ROX! WRITE MOOORE! With a diff oc tho...:)

WOW, again WOW! This story is amazing! This is such a well written fic, that I have read it at least 3 times now, I also read the sequel and I love how you keep Qui- gon in character, very few fics ever manage to do that. Five of out five stars *****