| Reviews for The Unchosen |
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PSW chapter 45 . 5/28 Darn! I was hoping he made his Force breakthrough before you ran out of steam. :-P But in any case, well done with this — an intriguing AU for sure ... Thanks for writing! |
Angel of light chapter 30 . 8/25/2017 This story is so beautiful! Thanks for sharing this with us! |
Rogue Tomato chapter 45 . 5/8/2017 Every once in a while, I will re-read this story, even though it has long been since abandoned. It is such a tender story, and I love the concept. I often wonder how this story would have ended, imagining Qui Gon preventing anyone and anything coming back to harm his family. I like to think that Obi Wan would have been an amazing big brother. :) |
White Ithiliel chapter 45 . 2/1/2017 I want the eeeeeend :'( I wanna see Obi-Wan with his new family and I wanna know about the babyyyy ! I wanna know if it's a boy or a girl and I wanna see how wonderful it will be for Obi and Qui and Juju to have a teeny tiny little Jinn around :3 ! |
stormseaker chapter 45 . 8/29/2016 This is a very sweet story for all of the pain Obi-Wan deals with. Thanks for sharing :) |
k chapter 45 . 4/24/2016 This was heartbreakingly beautiful. Im glad to have read it. I wish there was more to read, but im glad to have read it |
Everlily Emrys Holmes chapter 45 . 4/5/2016 Wow! I love this so much! I'm sad it's been so long since you've updated it, I wish you'd finish it at some point, but it's ok if not! Thanks for writing this! |
Binksy chapter 45 . 1/1/2016 A very sweet tale, thank you for sharing. |
MuggleCreator chapter 45 . 5/13/2015 Great story. |
Sue Clover chapter 45 . 4/14/2015 Yay. It's not finished, indeed no, but at least you didn't leave it on a totally negative note, and several things have been mended, if not all. You may never finish it, but I will be content anyway. Thank you for all of the feels. |
Sue Clover chapter 22 . 4/14/2015 Oh, dear. Well, somehow, I actually prefer this outcome. It makes everything quite clear. Staying with Qui-Gon was the right decision, and Obi-Wan knows that now, and he won't waste any effort trying to convince himself otherwise. He's still stuck in a terrible situation, but at least he won't try to separate himself from Qui-Gon in his mind. By the way, how are they going to use his Force Sensitivity with the collar on? I've never understood that part. Or maybe I never knew. |
Sue Clover chapter 21 . 4/14/2015 Hon. Surely you realize, Obi-Wan, that even though the Force gave you the visions, it gave you Qui-Gon, as well? Why don't you understand that it would not intend for you to forsake your bond, that it was a gift? Arggh! Ah, well. The will of the Force will become clear with time, I trust. Although, it worries me that this story is not marked as complete. You haven't left it unfinished, have you? |
Sue Clover chapter 5 . 4/14/2015 Oh, goodie. I've started reading a long one again. I'm glad. I want to see how this universe's Qui-Gon will handle things. And I want to get to know Julune better. She seems like a wonderful person. |
Guest chapter 45 . 9/19/2014 I love this story! I hope you decide to continue it one day. :) |
Rogue Tomato chapter 21 . 8/4/2014 Ahh, this chapter killed me. What an amazing story so far! |