 RoadrunnerGER 1/6/07 . chapter 7Wow, this really is a great story, full of suspense and psychology.
The long road home was the first story I read here and the reviews led me to your site.
I started to read By the bookThe informant first - and this was a good choice. I like the way you used Bobby's ordeal to underline his and Alex' unique friendship rather than to let them realize that they (romantically) love each other.
Now I'm looking forward to read the rest of By the book |
 Jonah 10/25/05 . chapter 1 Cool story but... what's a hoagie? |
 Jerry Davidson 9/5/05 . chapter 7 I find this story to be well thought out and well written. It's excellent, and seven chapters just flew by. I especially liked the addition of Bobby's mother being brought into the story. I thought the author handled that very, very well.
I take this opportunity to tell the author to keep writing. I look forward to her next work !
Jerry |
 justawritier 7/15/05 . chapter 7good ending.hope to read more from you soon. |
 TriStateCopFan 7/15/05 . chapter 7Good action w/ the way they caught Nicky (yeah, Bobby gets his revenge!) -poor Bobby- what a guilt trip all his life. I would like to have read the scene where Bobby & Alex have their talk, though. Nice job! (too bad it's over...I was likin' this story! ;-) |
 Muskoka Girl 7/15/05 . chapter 7Yay! They got the bastard! Great work! THis has been a fun read! |
 DaVinci13 7/14/05 . chapter 7Wow, poor Bobby. Good ending, though; glad Eames was there to stop Bobby from killing the jerk. I liked this story; you did a good job. Thanks a lot. ;P |
 Bizy 7/14/05 . chapter 6Thank you for your fanfiction. I adore it. when could I read the sequel ? what will it arrive at Goren ? |
 justawritier 7/10/05 . chapter 6great chapter.pls update soon. |
 DaVinci13 7/9/05 . chapter 6Ah, you're killing me! What's Bobby not saying? Great new chapter, like how there's still a little suspense despite the fact that most of the action's over. Can't wait for the next one. ;) |
 TriStateCopFan 7/9/05 . chapter 6No! You CANNOT leave me hangin' on the weekend! WHAT is it? LOL Oh, okay...it'll give me something to look forward to. Good chapter - nice touch w/ a visit from (a lucid) mom. Por Bobby xoBGxo UPDATE SOON, please! ;-) |
 Franta 7/6/05 . chapter 5Awesome! I really liked the end. it's so true to human nature- despite the fact that we protest and protest, it's because we take things like that for granted. Good work! I can't wait for the rest. |
 Muskoka Girl 7/5/05 . chapter 5Well Bobby you blew it this time boy'o! :D
Please update soon! I am loving this excellent story! |
 TriStateCopFan 7/5/05 . chapter 5Really good! Poor Bobby :-( I like the way you got to her inner thinking/feelings. He REALLY needs/wants Alex there...he's so darn stubborn...when is gonna' admit it to her? She saved him from the assassin for gosh sake...he owes her at least that! Keep going ~ can't wait to see what happens when that shoulder is better and Bobby (hopefully) gets his revenge! |
 KendraC 7/4/05 . chapter 5 Well, Bobby, if she's angry and can't figure out what you're really feeling, is it any wonder she's gone?
*sighs* Still, she needs to be there, refusing to back down to get through to him. Meds and the docs alone probably won't be enough given his stubborness. And if he has any unusual reactiond to the meds, then recovery will take even longer...
Good luck with the rest of the story. I can't wait to see how you handle the remaining perps and this tension. |