 Blackflame 7/29/05 . chapter 1 wow... that was awesome |
 Story Weaver1 6/17/05 . chapter 1This was pretty sweet, butstill kinda sad. |
 Draco Blade 6/17/05 . chapter 1I can't put into words how touching that is. A very good story that seems more real than the game (and the game seemed really real) I can really see how the familt thing works. Great job! |
 Nameless 6/16/05 . chapter 1 Ah, that was sweet! And a bit sad too. I can definitly picture the "family dynamics" as you described them - Raine as the mother, Regal as the father, conflicting Zelos, etc. Sheena was a good voice to use; she's the sort, I think, to reflect on things like that. Anyway, nice drabble! |
 Miss Raine Sage 6/16/05 . chapter 1I really like it :D It's very well-written. |
 Holyknightsteve 6/16/05 . chapter 1Good job. It's heart-breaking when you realize that all of these friends have to leave one-another after they have realized that they truly are family. A Brothers-In-Arms kinda deal. |
 ManaMage 6/15/05 . chapter 1Aw,so sweet. 10/10, thats the only way I can describe it |
 E.S. Simeon 6/15/05 . chapter 1Excellent, that seemed to go out really well, great work. |