Loved it. I want to watch Stress Position again now, and see how freaked out they both look.

Nice job! I'm looking forward to reading more of your fics.

Oh, I love that ending. This was powerful. You had me run a gamut of emotions, curiousity, tears, horror, hope and then contentment with the ending.

Very well done.

Poor Bobby.

Good story. That episode was really something. My only comment is that Mike couldn't have started shooting if he wanted to. They checked their weapons at the enterance of the prison.

Again, good as ever. You're on a role with these stories. I really like your work, it's very touching.

~Ani

Good as ever!

I hail the great one.

Nice twist. Keep up the good work.

Nice story, well told. You might consider a beta... Waive means to dismiss, as in 'the suspect waived his right to council'. Wave is what you do with your hand, or an ocean swell. To wave off is to send someone away.

Wonderful little piece. Thank you.

This is really good, considering. Though I do have to say that if Bobby was afraid, he certainly didn't show it. He handled himself quite fine in there and convinced most of the wardens not to kill them. The last one, however, was the one where I could see Bobby freezing up after realizing he wasn't getting through. That asshole was probably just like his dad, here.

Anyway, like I said, reall well done. Bravo.

Very sweet. I'm going to have to visit the dentist. But lovely. Nicely done.

Nice. Just really, really nice. I'm not sure how you wrote this without seeing the ep, but I'm impressed.

That was excellent! For not having seen the episode, I think you did a great job capturing the feeling. Alex's witty remarks are right-on and our por Bobby :-( Reading this just MAKES ya' wanna' hug him. Great job! Can't wait to see more.

Wow... I'm speechless, this was great! I only saw bits and pieces of the ep. stress position on account of homework, I wish I had seen all of it though. This was such a cute little story, and I really hope you write more soon.