Oh. My. God. This was so great! Everyone was very in character and Roy was just adorable!

brilliant! :D

This is one of the better RoyRiza stories I've read (I'm obsessed) and I really think this story has continuation-potential.

I love this line:

"Her usually calm eyes were alight with a storm whose rains soon threatened to flood over."

also the whole "possibility #" bit- it was easy to relate to.

Love it! Man that was awesome!

dude! i shalleth forever heart this story!

When i first started reading FMA, i knew that roy and riza just HAD to be together, despite what anyone spelling and grammer were very good,but hey? what do i know about grammer!lol

-Star

Beatiful!

The beggining was slightly...odd.

But I loved the end!

Hey, you finally updated! Awesome; and so is this second chapter.

Favorite line, hands down: "I’m taking Riza somewhere to get warm."

*snickers* Tell me you had him say that on purpose.

Aw

So sweet

DUDE!

you're a natural at this, man!

bravo!

banbanzai!

and [of coarse]

'please, keep writing!'

[you're stuff's good man, real good]

Aww! That was so cute! (my review came kinda late, huh?) Keep up the great writing! Go Royai!

) aw...loved it!

great job )

Woot! About time... I was starting to actually believe there weren't any good RoyxRiza fanfics... Anyway, great job mate... Made me have a warm fuzzy feeling inside... Like I swallowed a kitten...

- Hikari

Very nice story. I really enjoyed it.

Nicely done.