I liked this a lot. I think it would fit in the series and it definitely goes with Kai's character.

that was so awesome. I love the way you described everything

Hey, great fic! I really enjoyed it and i look forward to seeing more of your awesome fics!

Wow... this was such a good story- for a one-shot? I agree with you about the fins being tattooed on sometime during season 2 and 3. And his earing is funny, no? What you say here really makes sense, and that's what I really like aboiut your stories. Everything is in real life, and dwelling on how the person feels or what they're reflecting on. It's so cool. You're awesome, don't forget it. Bi!

Kinda queer but good. I can imagine that Kai would be starnge enough that he would count going to get his face tattoed as a party. I liked it! Good job!

nice story, good description and detail but i'm not to sure about the whole story line. i personally exclude what he wears in v force because i think he dresses like a girl (earing, if you look at a bad picture of him he looks like he's wearing a girls top, painted face)