Oo, getting more interesting by the chapter. What's this with Auron? I will tell you that I haven't played all the way through X-2 yet, but I basically know all that happens. xD So if I don't know about something that I should, that's probably why. Sounds like it'll be interesting though...Tidus's death. The sick side of me wants to read that part, lol.

Ha, Lenne and Shuyin are so cute. ^^ But these death premonitions are making me uncomfortable. I sense this is your explanation as to why they both look so unshocked by the idea that they're both about to die? *cries* Too sad, too sad.

I look forward to more! And aww...I'm your bestest reviewer ever? That's so sweet! The best reviewers stick around for the best writers. ^_~

One thing I've always loved about your writing is your descriptions. It's always so beautiful in my head.

Also, the way you transition your character dialogue is awesome. Going from Auron to Rikku is no easy process, from my point of view, but you do it quite well. Just for comments. ^^

Oh no, I don't like that dream Lenne is having. :( That part is so sad...

(Sorry this review is late, you update too quick for me! lol)

i love it so far its really good

It's good, but Yunalesca was Yu Yevon's daughter - you didn't seem to take that into account.

Update soon!

~MakoAnima

great story. i enjoyed it! update soon please.

Hey, I just read both chapters of your fanfic and I'm really liking it...if you've written more, I'd love it if you sent it to me. I'm liking the direction this is taking, and I like how you're filling in plot holes. The whole Shuyin/Tidus thing is throwing me off, due to their existance being so far apart.

Please write back and let me know what's up :)

*gasp* Sara! You wrote a new story! YAYNESS!

Okay, this officially is awesome already. I love the way you're writing the relationship between Lenne and Shuyin, it's exactly how I would've pictured them. And Tidus is great, and Yuna is great...I can tell this is going to get good. After "The Devil's Playground" I have no doubts that this will be just as good, if not better.

Can't wait to see more!

I am quite interested in this tale...It weaves the two stories together in an interesting fashion..I look forward to future chapters!