Is there any chance of more chapters even after all this time? Pretty please I've been really enjoying your story. Thanks

is this story part of your life after stargate AU

I'm really liking this story. More Please and a great job.

Thanks for sharing.

very good hope you update soon.

I have really enjoyed this story and hope to see more of it. I love the interaction between Jack and John, they are so alike! Update again soon!

I love the deepening connection and John realizing all the things he does in the city without noticing. This is so great. I hope you continue it.

Very interesting. Dead on about Jack and John and hilarious dialogue in here.

Love the idea of the bond and John/Teyla moment.

Very moving and what a great way to share their happy news. A very SG-1 team chapter.

Good explanations and the part with Charlie is very moving. I'm a huge Sheppard fan so I like his parts the best though.

The three natural gene holders interactions are very cool and I love their silent communication.

I love Jack and John interacting here with the city although I always think of John having the closer ties/connections with Atlantis and ancient tech like where he blew away even Jack in The Rising in the control chair, I see how you are using the ancient downloads as supplementing his genes.

The bit about Thor is fabulous but my favorite parts is seeing Teyla's skills and contributions acknowledged. Wonderful details. Too often on the show it seems like John is the only person ever to acknowledge and admire all that she does/is capable of.

LOL. This is hilarious. Poor Jack getting publicly spanked by Carter and Daniel.

This is wonderful. I love the humor, the concept and character interaction. My only comment, although I think you just changed this for the purposes of the story, is that everyone on the shows including Jack and SG-1 always talks about Sheppard having the strongest gene and command of the tech of anyone.

Jack John ancient stuff AWESOME so I hope you continue this series.