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Scottjunkie
1/16/09 . chapter 8
very nice plot! Great job!
carmilla
9/10/05 . chapter 8
Whew, this has been, like always, an interesting and highly entertaining ride...

I see by your reviews that you're not serious about the vacation. Thanks.

I've also noticed that there is some discussion about what to name your universe. I think Bob-verse wouldn't be too bad, either. (Since he is your main OC, and could, with a few minor changes, be a character for an original work.)
Luc Star
9/8/05 . chapter 8
ok.. i know this is the end of this story but i hope youu're already working on the next installment of tales from the Notmanosverse.. hehe. yeah.. that's whaat i'm calling it now. umm... lemme know if you think its lame and you want your universe to be called something cooler. hehe. anyways.. loved thechapter and i gotta say.. i agree with Bob. Logan does need some time off. Umm.. i hope there are going to be some crossover action in the next story. maybe something with Angel. talking about the Buffyverse, there really hasn't any appearance made by any of the crew on Buffy besides Giles and that one time by Buffy. i hope they are going to show their faces once in a while. after all... the world is a small place you know. take care man.. and keep up the good work.
notmanos
9/7/05 . chapter 7
Named universe? Angel-X perhaps?:D (No clue, honestly.)

And actually, you're in luck, Doza - the next story is very Angel/Bob centric, as there's a couple of plot threads there I wanted to explore. Of course Logan shows up, but I had this idea involving Angel and his new crew trying to reclaim L.A. from Bob's dark secret. Ooh ...;*D
El Varon
9/7/05 . chapter 7
Excellent chapter. It seems to bme that they really had not idea what his genes could do.
Koenigsegg
9/7/05 . chapter 7
Hey that named universe is a cool idea.

Great Chapters so far, sorry I haven't done any public reviews lately.
Luc Star
9/7/05 . chapter 7
Yo Notmanos...hows it going friend? I'm glad you're still updating your stories on a regular basis. sorry... haven't been around for the last two months.. was on vacation. anyways.. this story once again is turning out to be just as interesting as all the rest of your stories... i hope however there is going to be some crossover action with Angel or BTVS coming up soon. i love the way you cross these two universes. you should go and name it you know... this universe you have created... like Uncanny R-Man has his Uncanny R-Verse and Agent G has his AGU. hehe. Notmanosverse. hmm... sounds alright i guess. anyways.. thanks for adding one more chapter to my fav crossover fanfiction. take care and keep up the good work.
El Varon
9/1/05 . chapter 6
Good chapter. I liked the explanation of how Logan's genes affected people; very believable.
El Varon
8/26/05 . chapter 5
Pretty good chapter.
El Varon
8/19/05 . chapter 4
You know, it occurs to me that futzing with nature like that tends to lead to disaster. Excellent couple of chapters.
carmilla
8/18/05 . chapter 4
Uhh... this is getting creepy.

But extremely good, as always.
notmanos
8/15/05 . chapter 3
Ha! No, that was an automatic spell check correction that I missed - thanks for catching it. You have to love this infernal device - or not, really...:D
Alex
8/15/05 . chapter 3
Ah, another great one. While reading the part where Logan walks through the village, I was listening to some rather cheery music and I had to go and turn it off. It just wasn't right. I pictured the whole scene, including the quiet, and I actually felt sad.

However... "he sat on the corner of Xavier’s death" had me laughing on the floor. Freudian slip or an honest typo? :) Please continue.
MidLifeCrisis
8/11/05 . chapter 2
How do you consistently churn out such great writing?

I'm glad you do and no, it's not been a waste of my time at all. It's been a great pleasure and like I said before, reading your stuff is one the the things that pushed me into writing, though I'm a long way from your level.

I never paid too much attention to the Angel/Buffy stuff until I read your stuff. Now I find I'm watching re-runs to see what it's all about. My kids are big fans and they've clued me into some things I may have missed.

Can't wait 'til the next installment.

Dee
El Varon
8/8/05 . chapter 2
Wow. It must've been something . . . horrible. Excellent chapter.
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