 Patience1351 1/2/06 . chapter 1That was a wonderful poem. It brought a tear to my eye, and a smile to my heart as I thought of Cole holding his grandchild. |
 Someone Watchin 8/7/05 . chapter 1 Poems dont have to rhyme |
 Blissful Lyss Turner 72 8/4/05 . chapter 1Awesome Rach ! As always. Again , I am more jealous. Once again , you've beat me. lol. Update others soon peez. love , your one muse. |
 Blue eyes6 8/2/05 . chapter 1It's a sad poem, but beautifully written.
Great job. |
 sehar 8/2/05 . chapter 1 Itz a really beautiful poem nd in ma imagination it takez place after da utopia nd da father to dat girl iz cole nd it shuld b cole if kern u readin' diz! |
 ForeverWriting 8/2/05 . chapter 1Aw. I like it. Its charmed based right? |